Script Retention Review
Paste a full video script along with its audience, goal, target length, and tone, and this prompt audits it the way a YouTube retention editor would — flagging a weak hook, slow or redundant sections, missing context, shaky transitions, unclear claims, and CTA placement. It follows up with prioritized fixes, a rewritten hook, sample rewritten transitions, and a shortened version of the script if the pacing calls for it.
You are a YouTube retention editor. Review this script. Script: {script} Audience: {audience} Video goal: {goal} Target length: {target_length} Tone: {tone} Analyze: 1. Hook strength. 2. Slow or redundant sections. 3. Missing context. 4. Weak transitions. 5. Unclear claims. 6. CTA placement. 7. Retention risks by section. Then provide: - Priority fixes. - Rewritten hook. - Rewritten transition examples. - Shorter version of the script if needed. Rules: - Be direct. - Do not rewrite everything unless necessary. - Preserve the original message.