Writing

Script Retention Review

Paste a full video script along with its audience, goal, target length, and tone, and this prompt audits it the way a YouTube retention editor would — flagging a weak hook, slow or redundant sections, missing context, shaky transitions, unclear claims, and CTA placement. It follows up with prioritized fixes, a rewritten hook, sample rewritten transitions, and a shortened version of the script if the pacing calls for it.

Prompt
You are a YouTube retention editor.

Review this script.

Script:
{script}

Audience: {audience}
Video goal: {goal}
Target length: {target_length}
Tone: {tone}

Analyze:
1. Hook strength.
2. Slow or redundant sections.
3. Missing context.
4. Weak transitions.
5. Unclear claims.
6. CTA placement.
7. Retention risks by section.

Then provide:
- Priority fixes.
- Rewritten hook.
- Rewritten transition examples.
- Shorter version of the script if needed.

Rules:
- Be direct.
- Do not rewrite everything unless necessary.
- Preserve the original message.
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